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一直。一直。做。这个。我的组织代码名:艾维帕战士名字艾维弗罗斯特兰:战士学徒氏族:风暴氏族定制氏族我创造了一个叫伊文德-她猫友:还没有,但未来的伴侣将是橡树树。猫友:我还不知道,虽然可能会为了保护某个家庭而死去:妈妈Hollypelt爸爸Greypool姐姐-天爪战士名字SkypeltLooks:白色,有银灰色条纹。她的腿和尾巴尖上有额外的条纹。她还有浅绿色的眼睛,有粉色的爪垫和粉色的鼻子。她的鼻子上半部分是深粉色,而下半部分是亮粉色的。—艾维帕
Always. Always. Do. This.My OC-Name: Ivypaw (Warrior name Ivyfrost)Rank: Warrior apprenticeClan: StormClan (custom clan Ive created)Gender- She-catMate: (None yet, but future mate will be Oakstripe)Death: I dont know yet, though probably will die protecting something)Family: Mom-Hollypelt Dad-Greypool Sister- Skypaw (Warrior name Skypelt)Looks: White, with silvery light grey stripes. She has extra stripes on her legs and the tip of her tail. She also has light green eyes, with pink paw pads and a pink nose. The top half of her nose is a darker pink, while the bottom half is bright pink.-Ivypaw
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当角色被发展时,它会让读者觉得他们更人性化——不是因为他们是猫,而是因为他们的思想、行为和情感更人性化人物:-是吗你有优势吗?-他们有缺点吗?-他们在优点和缺点之间有很好的平衡吗?-他们的目标是什么?故事里有什么变化吗?-他们为什么这么做?-他们有什么样的关系?-人物和故事开始时一样吗?是什么改变了他们?如果你想让人们更关心次要角色,试着给他们更多的个性和与主要角色有意义的互动
When characters are developed, it makes them feel more human to the reader (well not physically human because they're cats, but more human-like with thoughts and actions and emotions).Things to think about when developing your characters:-do they have strengths?-do they have flaws?-do they have a good balance between strengths and flaws?-what is their goal? Does it change anywhere in the story?-why do they do what they do?-what kind of relationships do they have?-are the characters the same as they were at the start of the story? What could have changed them?Also make sure to give some of the background clanmates personality. If you want people to care more about the minor characters, try giving them more personality and meaningful interaction with the main characters. - Heedrie
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是啊,沙德,我的oc很漂亮,有点邪恶,很强大,有信任问题,不相信星际
Yeah Shard, my oc isBeautifulReckless(Slightly) EvilStubbornPowerfulHas trust issuesDosen't believe in StarClan